Saturday, August 7, 2010

The mistake,man has done since Adam's

Writhing in pain,screaming in dark,

My soul being clasped in mysery

Desperately trying to free itself,

From the clenches of agony gripping my soul

Thrawling away in momentary pleasures,

Searching for perfections,which really are fictious.

  The mind never stops its fight over a soul,

weak enough to be enslaved.

The conflict persists between the,

soul-blessed with love,honesty and simplicity &

mind-with a cache of deception,disdain

and excessive ambitions,

lured easily by luxury,misgivings and myths..

The struggle continues..until finally,

my soul stops enduring the conflict.

Surrenders itself,defeated and tormented..

The darkness envelops,

the shackles too bind strongly.

The deceptive mind,convinced,

being powerful & successful,

Ignores the bleeding soul,

immured,agonising,crying for help,

trying in vain to knock sense.

Years pass,I succeed materialistically,

yet, I remain miserable,unable to appease,

the desires of my perceptions.

Then,I remember,the moment,

I had let my soul lose the conflict

The soul- which I had,

long since imprisoned away,in darkness

with chains soo strongly bound,

that are too late to be unleashed..

I regret now, in deep anguish,

for ignoring my soul,

which otherwise would have,

given me its blessings.

I realise now,surrounded by darkness,

bound in shackles,

The mistake,man has done since Adam's


Maverick said...

luv da subject that you chose...its beautiful...a subject I myself luv to deal with....I hav written about it sumwer I guess....but its not as profound as u....beautiful work! keep at it! tc! :)

Aparna said...

we should let our soul and heart win over mind....coz the guiding force is sixth sense and gut intuition seldom is wrong

beautiful post ree!....very profound theme!

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